let loose frission!


Wonderfully reckless wind and waves:

shoreline smashed, white fringed rave,

undisciplined salt swell, badly behaved.


Shout! Storm tumult makes hoarse,

hand anchored, bodies bow to force,

rusty railings gripped tight, of course.


Turbulent salt-water, surge splashing:

kettle-drum boom, cymbals crashing,

blown-about boats, sails crack-thrashing.


Seascape electric: let loose frisson!

Exhilarating, forced into submission,

sea spirit shouts –  warily we watch and listen.





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