let loose frission!


wonderfully reckless wind and waves,

shoreline smashed, white fringed rave,

undisciplined salted swell, badly behaved.


shout, storm tumult makes you hoarse,

hand anchored, bodies bow to force,

rusty railings gripped tight, of course.


turbulent salt-water, surge splashing,

kettle-drum boom, cymbals crashing,

blown-about boats, sails crack-thrashing.


seascape electric: let loose frisson!

exhilarating, forced into submission,

Neptune shouts – in awe we listen.





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