let loose frission!


Wonderfully reckless wind and waves:

shoreline smashed, white fringed rave,

undisciplined salt swell, badly behaved.


Shout! Tumbling tumult makes hoarse,

hand anchored, bodies bow to force,

rusty railings gripped tight, of course.


Turbulent salt-water, surge splashing:

kettle-drum boom, cymbals crashing,

storm-battered coat-fabric thrashing.


Seascape alive, let loose drunk-frisson!

Exhilarating, forcing into submission,

sea warily watched, joyfully listened.




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